Preferred Position — A Reader’s Guide

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Dryfoos, Dave, 1915-2003 Project Gutenberg 2021
Science fiction; Short stories; Leisure -- Fiction; Spouses -- Fiction; Work -- Fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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Words: 4,818
Reading time: 21 min
Text sections: 1
In a future of enforced leisure, a bored couple bickers over trivialities while longing for purpose. Dryfoos uses domestic automation and petty arguments to satirize a society where work is outlawed and even slavery seems appealing.
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The bed wakes them. A marionette delivers coffee with a dance that has long ceased to amuse. Les and Janet, aged sixty and fifty-five, face another day of nothing to do. Their world has eliminated illness, want, and risk—but also purpose. Dryfoos opens with a precise, sardonic tone: the bed coos, the doll minces, and the couple snarls and pouts. The setting is a domestic future where every need is met, yet the only conflict is between spouses who have run out of things to argue about. The story’s tension lies not in external threat but in the vacuum left by the absence of work.

A Future of Enforced Leisure

The story’s premise is established through the couple’s morning routine. Les complains there is “not a darned thing to do,” and Janet worries that inactivity will lead to accusations of suicide—a crime punishable by slavery. The threat of slavery is treated as both absurd and desirable: Les muses that “slavery’d at least be a change,” while Janet reminds him that slaves are tortured. This exchange reveals a society where the only alternative to boredom is a worse fate. The characters are trapped not by technology but by a social system that has outlawed meaningful effort. Dryfoos does not explain how this world came to be; instead, he lets the dialogue imply a history of solved problems that have created new ones.

Domestic Automation as Satire

The automated home is a source of irritation rather than comfort. The bed’s cooing voice, the marionette’s theatrical coffee delivery, and the “film-dress” Janet wears all point to a world of superfluous design. Les calls the dolls “a nuisance” and prefers a “plain, automatic dispenser,” but Janet finds that even more boring. Their argument over appliances mirrors their larger dissatisfaction: they have the power to customize their environment, but no desire to engage with it. The technology is not malevolent—it is simply tiresome. Dryfoos uses these details to critique a consumer culture that has perfected convenience to the point of meaninglessness.

Marriage as a Mirror of Stagnation

The couple’s dynamic is central to the story’s tension. They bicker over trivialities—whether to get up, whether to eat—but their arguments are a ritual that fills time. Janet accuses Les of selfishness for complaining about his sixty-five remaining years, while she has seventy and cannot yet have her first child. This detail, dropped casually, hints at a world where reproduction is delayed and longevity is guaranteed. Their conflict is both petty and profound: they have no external challenges, so they turn on each other. The story’s title, Preferred Position, may refer to their desire for a different role in life—one that the future has denied them.

Dryfoos’s story is a satire of a utopia gone flat. It does not offer a solution or a dramatic escape; instead, it lingers on the small, sharp exchanges that define a marriage under the pressure of too much time. Readers should pay attention to how the author uses domestic details—the bed, the doll, the pills—to build a world that feels both familiar and alien. The humor is dry, the tension real, and the ending, though not included here, is likely to be as ambivalent as the opening.

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